The outfit and collar are new
I am here to submit to you
I let you do what you please
and come to you upon my knees
All of your pleasures are new to me
You make me feel so new and free
You show me things I never could have imagined
and bring all my desires and senses to the surface
I am here to be used and loved by you
and give you what you please
you make me yours with your words and actions
I want to be submissive for you
A contest entry
- Picture/ word Prompt. by Leonura.
900 points, ended November 1, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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That was beautifully written. Very relatable for those of us who've been there ourselves.
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A wish and a vow
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Great job, this was nicely written and expresses what you feel about your Master without being explicit. Haven't written any of this kind of stuff myself but yours is lovely
~ Ink
XOXOXOXOXOXO
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Very nice entry I concure with the comments left by Leonura. Though this is very well thought out could be a bit more and elaborated but job well done.
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Sweet and carin', though I would remind You that when speakin' of a Master, You should always remember to capitalize.. But besides that, this was a very good poem, thank You for Your entry.
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Desire and hunger mixed for lust
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