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Duality Into Unity

Every sentient being has a

continuum of mind,

evolving independently;

creating you will find.

 

Observer develops mental states,

corresponding to what's perceived;

brought together infinity of minds,

outcome, world conceived.

 

When particles are observed

waves disappear,

from energy to matter;

perceptions will interfere.

 

State of electrons depends

on what we see,

interrupted by senses

as we create reality.

 

The mystery of wave particles,

duality is one;

one light propagating as waves;

creating all and none,

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  • ea silver member
    August 3
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    a bit hard to comprehend, honestly. Sounds like you're trying to apply some theory of high-end physics to the idea of unity.


  • Systems Malfunction
    November 11, 2008
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    This was good! I really liked the flow and rhyme scheme.


  • FlamesDragoness
    November 2, 2008

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    Excellent title for your poem!

    I adore Science and it's observations,
    and especially impact and explorations
    to unravel...the un-seen.

    You wrote this well!
    The State of electrons
    depends on what we see,
    interrupted by senses
    as we create reality.

    Have you read or researched
    the "god spot" of the brain internally,
    when surgeons open the brain
    and touch lightly upon varied centers
    while patient is awake....
    truly interesting and thought
    provoking indeed....
    even the scientist..were all
    carefully theorizing.

    wonderful poem,
    thankyou for your entry!

    flamesdragoness


  • Maili Knephthan gold member
    November 2, 2008
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    State of electrons depends

    on what we see,

    interrupted by senses

    as we create reality.



    The mystery of wave particles,

    duality is one;

    one light propagating as waves;

    creating all and none,

    Nice analogy to the truth of things. I enjoyed this much Thanks for sharing


  • Providence
    November 1, 2008

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    Excellent! The fluctuation of the physical and the manifestation of the soiritual!

    Bravo!

    Marianne

  • goalsv
    November 1, 2008

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    Nicely done, a great job of getting philosophical. Almost sounded like something that Dr Spock of Star Trek would say to captain Kirk. Loved the stanza about eletrons being what we see and creating reality.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    October 31, 2008

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    yeah..

    this is a very metaphysical, logistical, spiritual trip into the nether reaches of an otherworldly kind!..very serenely depicted for me at least.


  • Denerica silver member
    October 31, 2008

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    Beautiful

    State of electrons depends on what we see, interrepted by senses as we create reality...discovering and knowing how we came do be, or even how God was always formed...you know I have to mix spirituality with philosophy...bless you my friend


  • Selfexpressive
    October 31, 2008

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    Really great poem my friend... very well expressed and worded... I could really relate to this poem...

    Selfexpressive aka Karen xx


  • princehusayn
    October 31, 2008

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    Be and it is Powerful write

    Thats where we came from but its not here it created here but here is where we are with light moving matter causeing effects leaving forensic residue evidence of our existance. This write took me there in less than a flash something experienced maybe observed seldom put in words seldom shared...This is the procession from one to many from many to one. There is infinite feasting in this write thank you soul for sharing I enjoyed the write. Peace and empowerment.

  • HeartsFlowers
    October 31, 2008

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    Loved it!

    Wow! Fantastic poem! The second verse is my favorite: Observer develops mental states, corresponding to what's perceived, brought together infinity of minds, outcome, world conceived. Cool stuff.

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