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Lost In Misery

 

 

Even though you're here again

my heart is still shattered

I find myself lost in misery

 

the scars you gave me

are still skin deep

 

I long for tranquility

as I look up to find

the sky falling upon me

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

30-40 Words
Prompt: Stars Still Fall

A contest entry

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  • jakesgirl
    November 2, 2008
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    So sad but I feel this way to sometimes dont we all? Good luck in the contest btw


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    This is so sad and still beautiful. your words held an elegance that was well done. Best to you in the contest


  • Selfexpressive
    October 31, 2008
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    Beautiful write here... very much heartfelt... very best of luck,

    Selfexpressive aka Karen xx


  • hotchocolate gold member
    October 31, 2008

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    I'm liking this one here! You did a great job on this write Good luck in the contest! Great BG!

    I long for tranquility
    as I look up to find
    the sky falling upon me