Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Time

When time goes by in the blink of an eye,
Wonder why and how the loss of you blows my mind.
Regrets take control and i feel like everything was a lie.
Things happened, words used, all because I was in a bind.
I didn't know who I was.
I didn't know what happened to me.
I use to be there for you when nobody else was.
When I try to talk to you all I can do is flee,
from the problems that we caused.
I open my eyes and time seems to slow
I see who I was and who I am now
Is it to late for me to show,,
that I can be me and I can be good.
Don't give up on me, please, you mean too much to me

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Coffer
    November 2, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Sad, but hopeful peice of lookink on the bighter side, and trying with all your heart. Great sense of emotion, and good luck.