When time goes by in the blink of an eye,
Wonder why and how the loss of you blows my mind.
Regrets take control and i feel like everything was a lie.
Things happened, words used, all because I was in a bind.
I didn't know who I was.
I didn't know what happened to me.
I use to be there for you when nobody else was.
When I try to talk to you all I can do is flee,
from the problems that we caused.
I open my eyes and time seems to slow
I see who I was and who I am now
Is it to late for me to show,,
that I can be me and I can be good.
Don't give up on me, please, you mean too much to me
A contest entry
- Fresh Emotion by Coffer.
800 points, ended November 3, 2008, 19 entries
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Sad, but hopeful peice of lookink on the bighter side, and trying with all your heart. Great sense of emotion, and good luck.

