Spirits lurk in the dead of night
Coming out to give you a fright
Creatures scare you and cause you to scream
The darkest of nights, the night of halloween
Evil reisdes in every shadow of the dark
Causing people to scream and dogs to bark
But its just once a year, and soon it will leave....
BUT IT WILL RETURN ON ALL HALLOWS EVE.....
Author notes
I love HALLOWEEN!
A contest entry
- Ghosts, Ghouls and Spooky Tales - Ages 13 to 17 by The Fun House.
400 points, ended November 18, 2008, 7 entries
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This is good but sadly Halloween is not my favorite holiday and I felt there wasn't anything really special or that stuck out to me about this poem. The rhyming was good though and helped the poem flow nicely. Good job and good luck. ~Des
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oh i loved this one for sure.
it is filled with the spirit of halloween. The rhyme was good and flowed very well. Great. Good luck in the contest.
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Short but it says quite alot. I too do love Halloween myself and really enjoyed reading this. Good luck in the contest.
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A great holiday write. You have a nice rhyme scheme going in this piece. Good job. Take care and Have fun. Steve
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Happy Halloween.
This is awesome! The ryhming and flow of the poem is perfect.
Oh, and the ending is amazing. It's a great way to sum up the poem.
However, I think you should change "But it's just once a day" to "But it's just once a year." I just don't think that saying once a day makes a lot of sense. If you change that the poem will be even better!
Great job!
xx
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