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[ Ambiguous, the embracing. ]

Ambiguous, the embracing.
Walking silently through grass wet with dreams,
From lonely nights in.
World changing the search to illusions.
The wanting is deified.
Is wanting the illusions to search the changing world,
In nights lonely from dreams with wet grass,
Through silently walking,
Embracing the ambiguous?

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  • Amera gold member
    November 14, 2008

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    "Embracing the ambiguous" You composed a wonderful and original take on the prompt. Thank you for adding this poem to the contest. You have the heart of a poet.

    Love,
    Amera♥