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Mythomaniacs.

 

The truth lies, 
hidden under curling lips,
hurling invectives.

It squats hooded
beneath blinking eyes,
that shift like
a transient wandering
aimlessly under your
inquisitive glance.

Restless fingers
expound the air,
or simply grip
each other
in sweaty palms.

A crimson blush
quickly graces
the cheeks of their
"It wasn't me!" faces
betraying the true
colors of their
addiction to fiction

They hunch forward
in gargoyle poses,
unable to relax
in the turmoil
of  their untruth.


Liars paint a portrait
of forgery on the canvas
of their stretched flesh,
using pigments of their
imagination to paint
a prettier picture.


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  • Amera gold member
    November 14, 2008

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    Direct and to the point! I like it! This is the first poem I have seen that used that picture prompt and I'm glad you did.

    Love,
    Amera


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    Great write and that third stanza speaks of the unequivocal truth of body language, which I happen to study as a Federal Police Officer. This knowledge comes in quite handy and is a powerful tool for anyone really as there is a part of the human brain that subconsciously, simply cannot hide the truth.


    All the best,
    mj.


  • Pure Thought silver member
    October 31, 2008
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    Point blank, damn good!

    I haven't written mine yet, but yours is better.