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An Ambiguous Parable For Modern Times



Bushwhacked
the blind
by the millions
stumbled deep into
a tangled growth
of eight years.

Many of their best
were torn to shreds,
by following a leader,
who promised peace
on the other side.

But the other side
held a cliff,
where they
totter now,
being cajoled to
take steps back
to more of the
same bushwhacking,
or perish in
the blackness that
waits before them.

But the blackness
holds a bridge,
offering a change
in their direction,
that would lead perhaps
to lives unscathed
by the bushwhacking.

And so many
will step off
with the faith
of Moses,
leaving the
burning bush behind,
and find a
promised land.

Others  will remain
cowered in the shadows
of the bushwhacked
refusing to see
that the entanglement
of their choice
will separate them
forever from the masses,
yearning for peace.






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  • Amera gold member
    November 14, 2008
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    Bushwhacked indeed! I sure hope things get better... soon!

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • suseann
    November 1, 2008

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    It's a clear viewed case in fact of the "blinders crowd" following further flailing falls for us all. I personally think of such as rabid blind dogs from hell.A strikingly poignant and pertinent current state of affairs piece penned well.


  • Swan song gold member
    October 31, 2008

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    You had better be careful the secret service may come get you and make you go hunting with Dick Cheny lol Excellent poem!


  • lunarlunacy
    October 31, 2008
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    I just love a good Bush beating. LOL


  • Rhythm Child
    October 31, 2008

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    this was a very good wrote, it told a story expertly and reminds me of a poem i had to study for college, very well written

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