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I'll Take You To A Castle

Her stones are steeped in history as deep as the sweet mystery in your eyes.
Her ghosts drift lonely in mists of morning as gentle as the memory of your sigh.
Her floors echo to long lost footsteps as empty as my heart without you near.
Take my hand  and as I have always done  they too will hold your presence dear.
Through ages lovers dreamed their dreams within her green and haunted grounds.
Like them, within her gates I’ll close my eyes and fold you in my arms.
And listen to the crying and laughter sounding down the years of summers past.
My heart will join the singing ‘til the winds of heaven have blown out all the stars.

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  • Sandygram silver member
    November 6, 2008

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    Beautiful Words

    Congratulations on the Bronze . A lovely poem to capture the heart. A delight to read this morning. Take care, Sandy


  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    November 2, 2008
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    Thank you for your most beautifully worded entry, Josie


  • Ais
    October 31, 2008
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    You have blown me away
    Nuff said