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Are You near?

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Wondering if you have been here
That person that my soul holds dear
The one that can help me become whole
The other half of my deepest soul

The one that makes my life worthwhile
Whose eyes, alone, can make me smile
The things that only lovers know
That show themselves when we don’t know

Now I know that you will show up one day
And my heart, soul and mind intact will stay
Forever, together, just me and you
You will want these same things too

 

 

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  • Deceits Tears silver member
    November 2, 2008

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    I just love this piece, my favourite part is...

    Wondering If you have been here
    That person that my soul holds dear
    The one that can help me become whole
    The other half of my deepest soul

    LOVELY




  • Disturbed Prodigy
    October 31, 2008

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    a wonderful poem that hold a truly beautiful idea behind it, amazing work, keep it flowing my friend.