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Final Fall

Thick summer nights
long gone
with colours that wither
away in the fall

Naked branches sway
to and fro
like an unfinished masterpiece
etched in soft strokes

Skies of ember reveal
sunsets warm hue
affecting the very
depths of your soul

Reflections of solitary
days gone by
winds shifting nature's
aria as waltzing clouds
drift awry

Seasons final descent shed
in endless new growth
weaves an unknown trail
along it's distant
windswept journey

 


Author notes

wanted to write something to reflect the beautiful
fall landscape here in minnesota.

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  • Frogzter gold member
    November 11
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    Wonderful imagery and eloquently written. A joy to read. THanks for entering and best wishes.

    Frogz~


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 31

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    Indeed, Autumn is a masterful painter with an unlimited palette, it seems. A lovely penning, Poet. Good luck in the contest.



  • poets whisper
    September 23

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    beautiful metaphor using autumn as the ... well as the metaphor Lovely imagery too throughout the entire write. I'd love to live where the seasons change. We go from hot to cold but not much color. From green and alive to bare and dead ... thank you for entering


  • Little Blue Bird
    November 1, 2008
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    Beautiful

    Thank you for entering the contest and good luck.