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for every line .....



such an impressive age
summing up his life
in peaked maturity

reached against all odds

and I've seen him ~
illnesses cured
and loses buried beneath the skin




never forgotten




just gone...

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Prompt: old scars

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    November 1, 2008

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    This leaves the reader contemplating so many things, I enjoyed this thorooughly. best to you in the contest


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    October 31, 2008

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    A wonderful take on the prompt! This certainly has a very thoughtful aura about it!
    All the bnest with this
    Gaylene