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Mission Space...part one

30 seconds to countdown
All checks completed
Switch to Pilot control
All safety devices showing green light
Computer panel showing all sectors ready
Fuel tanks show full
All systems are go
Clamp down seat belt triggers

All Astronauts lower UV visors
Secure all envirosuit life systems
10...9...8...7...6...5...4...3...2...1
Lift-Off  (Engines Roar!!!)
Smoke rises, fire, rumbling,
Line of smoke as Shuttle and boosters rise
Up, Up and Up , disappearing in sky
Trail of smoke still rising
Incredible g force in cabin

Suddenly momentum gained
Bright green shimmer out of portholes
Below the earth shows her face
Weightlessness feeling cabin pressure gained
Remove helmets "We are in free-flight orbit
Crew works on checks for sustained circumnavigation
Open bay doors to release payload
Object slowly removed from dock
Now we are ready to start the tasks we came for..

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 4, 2008

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    Felt like I was watching a spaceship take off here. Very good descriptiveness. Nice take on the prompt.