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storm clouds






her wedding-garlands decay
withering in the silence
of naked hands ~

the winds have changed
causing damage everywhere...

 

And in the grim undertow of winter

she sees a dark display

of rememberance

painted on her window

 

unmoved 

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Prompt: Manhattan chill

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    November 2, 2008
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    This is stunning, I was totally left in wonder and beauty by the end. Best to you in the contest

  • davidwright silver member
    October 31, 2008

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    Sad reminders of other time. A thoughtfulm write and a good read. Good luck in te contest and happy trails.