W ithout thought
I bow to you
L ying at your feet
L ovingly worshiping you
I give myself body and soul
N ever questioning your judgement
G aining your trust forever
TO bond with your soul
S ouly for your pleasure and enjoyment
E verything is to please only you
R egardless of the consequences
V indicated by your smile
E ternal happiness in submitting to you
Author notes
Word: submissive.
A contest entry
- Picture/ word Prompt. by Leonura.
900 points, ended November 1, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Struggling to find my muse lately :(
Comments
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Tender and expressive, such is a submissive, though with the right capitalization, this would be perfect. I love the thought in this poem, truly submissive. thank Ye verra much fer Yer entry.
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Thank you
Thank you so much for the wonderful comment and the HM
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Both a clever acrostic and a really great capture of the image... well done and best of luck.
Ken
PS Last stanza - "Solely"
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Thank you
Thank you for your kind words. Souly was a play on words
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You have penned this really well dear poet,it is very sensual and beautiful, it is also a wonderful take on the prompts.I wish you well in this contest.
Blessing of love and happiness to you,
Angel-anne
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Thank you
Thank you very much. This was a fun prompt to work with
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Lovely acrostic, and a very soft interpretation of the prompt... wonderfully written...
small typo perhaps , "solely" unless you have purposely made the play on words... enjoyed this.
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Thank you
Thank you, it was a play on words
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Beautifully done.. showing what is beneath submission...
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Thank you
Your comments are appreciated so much. Learned a lot from your work
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