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An Affair

i sit and wait
wondering why
i drink my tea
look at the sky

i think back
these past few days
these past few days
the complex bouquets

it happend fast
i saw you there
you saw me here
the dawn of an affair

i saw the ring
i knew, i knew
yet still i went
to home with you

that night
the best
hearing you heart
through your pounding chest

then the light came on
your wife was home
she screamed at you
she must have known

an affair

Author notes

Yer its not great... actually its really bad but whatever...

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  • Edited
    November 21, 2008

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    well i think it is pretty cool, great ending, kinda sneaks up on you and bites you in the rear. well done