you've gone
from a candle
and its secret
wishes
to fast-paced
fibers of
electricity
like a diary
that turns to
poetry
everything else
that means more
before phrasing
expands
inside you
as you add beads
to the necklace
glass becomes
an industrial
diamond
and the
emphasis
is up
to you
you who do
both
the flames &
the melting
Author notes
for Kevin
Happy birthday! 
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refreshing
i love this....Kevin surely must be proud! my favorite lines are the last four. what a strong and lovely phrase. thanks for your comment as well & for blowing me away.
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100th Hood-Wink!
I really love this poem - it is a kickass birthday poem and I hope that it was enjoyed! The ending was my favorite part of this by far - but the rest was still outstanding
love it!
Keep writing
Polly
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Aww thank you!
well I'm not sure he even read it, but i'm quite glad you like it Especiallyh the ending. hehe. thanks
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Love it Di. You are a talented poet and it's always a joy to read your work.
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