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Taken Away

I'm lost to remembrance, eyes closed embracing
memories ignored to the point of forgetting

The last time I saw you,
smile trembling at the corner of your mouth

Eyes intent on mine and promising
to never look away

To always hold everything worth maintaining
that vibrant connection

Of you and me and me with you.
Us.

I'm beside you, you would whisper
at night in the dark

Always beside you
here to guide you

Forever yours.
Hold onto me.

Your hand in mine
warm and solid

Real.
All that I had asked for.

And now its my mouth that is trembling,
my eyes that are intent

On trying not to give in
to tears.

Always beside you,
you said.

So why am I standing alone now?
Where is your hand?

Certainly not here beside me
alone in the dark

At the mercy of memories
needing to be forgotten.

Take it away.
Take yourself away.

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Blame it all on William Fitzsimmons. I only just now listened to him and this is what happened. Damn angsty lyrics.

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  • Seven Kinky
    December 11, 2008
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    0_o; You sometimes frighten me. I thought someone had trampled your fragile heart. Thought I was gonna have to break out the clubber walk there for a minute. ...yeah...you remember.

    Hearts and stars, sister mine. Stop listening to angsty lyrics or I shall beat you until you piss blood!

    ...or not.


    • Trapped Rage
      December 11, 2008
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      Sometimes I feel that half of why I feel so cut off from everyone and everything around me is because I feel like I've lived lifetimes. And it expresses itself in me acting beyond my years and writing and feeling things I should have no clue about...Does that make any sense?

      I dunno. Didn't mean to get serious, and sorry for scaring you. I should put an alert in my titles, because I do this shit so often. Rest assured, before the heart breaking had commenced you would have known I was seeing someone at all, lol. Love you.