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Poisonous cheater

screaming organ
Could be an exaggeration
From the constant lies I speak
Ill from bubbling digestion

A cup of disaster
Truth in liquid form
Contained within a mug marked poison
I sit waiting in his dorm

I'll never find another
His empty soul was mine to revive
My body was his addiction
We had lovers internal drive

Then innoces face came along
and ripped his wires apart
Tricked his mind with lies
Made him fall for her; a sleazy tart

Chicken wire wrapped around his heart
Mine drowing in self pity
Her blood colored nails had him in her grip
He snuck out to see me; his pretty

I couldn't hide my feelings
That I was a puzzle missing a part
How could he betray me
He stole the missing piece; my heart

I'm to weak to fight
For something that is now lost
Woman in red has won his lust
My aurora of life was just the cost

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  • new born
    November 2, 2008
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    Nice job! Please fix the spelling errors. I loved your take on the picture.