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handjob in a cinema

I'm guessing you dont remember but you might..
Do you remember?
We were watching some movie,
Some really fucking boring chick flick movie.
And I hate that shit
But I said I’d see it because I knew you liked it.
And I was regretting my considerate attitude after about five minutes of that
STRIDENT MEANINGLESS SENTIMENTAL DRIVEL!!

Then just as I was about to lapse into a coma
I felt your hand crawling up my thigh and the situation PERKEDUP considerably.
You made your way to my belt and quickly
Unbuckled me.
Then it was down with the zipper
and you rummaged in my jeans for what was there.

It was better than actual sex
you stroked me
UP AND DOWN AND UP AND DOWN
and I leaned into you like a child being comforted
kissing your neck and cuddling your breasts

As a cliched hollywood happy ending drew ever closer
up on the BIG SCREEN
my own happy ending was much sleazier and stickier
I whispered “Please slow down, I’m going to Come.”
You said “Go on then.”
And only increased the pace of your stroke

I obviously didn't really want
any slowing of the pace anyway.

HELPLESS (But not really)
I sat
As semen poured out of me
And wet my jeans and t-shirt

I was a mess.

You wiped your hand on the chair and kissed me hard as my cock shrank in your hand.

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  • You totally drew me in with the title. This is freaking hot!!!! I love it. You are a talented writer.


  • Angelflower
    December 15, 2008

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    Thanks for the heatwave. I really needed it..Lol. you did great best of luck in the contest.

    Angel


  • hotchocolate gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    This was written very well and I enjoyed reading this! Welcome to AllPoetry
    Check out my Night at the movies LOL!


  • FaerieNWonderland
    October 30, 2008
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    lol i like this very sexy and sweet at the same time


  • Leech
    October 30, 2008

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    uhm.... sexy write. I liked it and I thought the part about the chick flick was pretty funny. those movies can get pretty annoying

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