Your eyes are like crystals
Im oblivious to the cliche
They crinkle and shine
when you smile
I love the way your lips move
With flirty thirst
They purse and pout
Push them out
Feel this too
Every second last an hour
Every hour lasts a year
And the years fly by like
Birds migrating south for the winter
I feel it here
A growth, a strength, a need
And
You feel it there
A chasm, a fire,
An itch
To be scratched
We intertwine and
I stroke your softness
Hard I am
And strong is your grip
Down we go
And when both ready
In mind and body
We fit together like a jigsaw
A rhythm possesses
And caresses our bodies to cataclysm
Eyes locked into mine you seize up in pleasure
And you come
And I come
And we're done.
Author notes
Its like that sometimes.
A contest entry
- !!!!*Making Love Intensely*!!!! by ForeverLastingComa.
490 points, ended February 22, 55 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ARE YOU MAN ENOUGH? by Paloszoo.
700 points, ended December 16, 2008, 17 entries
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"and you come, and i come, and we're done"......yeah, it IS like that sometimes....no pretense, no "lava explosions" just....that. Nice.
Love, Lane
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I want to have sex now. Thank you. haha. and thanks for commenting on my poems. You are very sweet. Very well written darlin.
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I love the first stanza. It's really sweet. The reast of the poem was also well written! It has the potential to be a great erotic poem, but it seems like you completely gave up in the end like you didn't feel like writing anymore. I'd love to see some explosive action in the end! Thanks for entering my contest! Good luck!
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Well the ending was not what I was expecting but it is interesting ... kinda gives a little twist to the passion in the write
Good poem
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This is a good write that I enjoyed reading!
Down we go
And when both ready
In mind and body
We fit together like a jigsaw
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