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Oliver Twist.(Quinzaine)

Oliver Twist, orphan boy
Will he be caught in
Fagin's traps?

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    November 21, 2008

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    Thank you for your entry

    I wish you had put the words you used in your author notes. It does look though as if you have the required amount of words. This one so far makes the most sense to me. I like it. I also like that you centered it on the page.

    The form was followed well and had really good flow in it. Good job with the 15 syllables and keeping the flow smooth.

    I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.

    God Bless
    Tammy