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The Things I Do For You

I could be anywhere,
doing anything,
but I'll stay a while,
if it's with you.

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WinterEssa

Time you enjoy wasting is not wasted, John Lennon

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  • Between My Ears
    November 2, 2008
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    Great flow, clear message. Nice work!


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    October 31, 2008
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    Good write

  • Crescitvirtus
    October 31, 2008
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    Loved the sentiment. It isn't what you do that matters, it's who you do it with!

  • davidwright silver member
    October 31, 2008
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    Very nice. Kind words for a loved one or a friend. Good luck in the contest and happy trails


  • Three Doves
    October 31, 2008

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    Straight from the heart! Keep Writing! Best wishes in life and the contest.
    Peace in light and love
    Noah


  • 2lullabyhaven
    October 31, 2008

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    When is a waste, a waste? Loving the way you played to the prompt with deft cleverness lol and good luck to you in the contest

  • copper29
    October 30, 2008

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    Nice. There's a certain cockiness to the speaker that's actually rather charming. Nice, short, cute, and sweet. Good job!

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