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Little Danny Myspace

Little Danny Myspace
sits up in his room
always on his laptop
always on the move

From one site to the next
signing in and out
Little Danny Myspace
moving all about

First he checks the quiz site
no new friends today
then he checks his Facebook
he left it on "Away"

Next he checks his My Space
1 comment or 2
a quick look on All Poetry
but still he isn't through

Now he gets on Yahoo,
AOL, and MSN
looking for a comment,
a new invite, or new friend,

For messages, or bulletins,
a "hi," "hey," or "hello"
but nothing does he find
no matter where he goes

he checks the forum site
he checks all the IM's
he checks the little guestbooks
on websites he has built

As he sees the emptiness
a tear falls down his face
no one seems to care for
Little Danny Myspace

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  • Salt Walker
    November 2, 2008
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    hm. sad day. this reminded me of the song myspace mixdown by jefree star


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    October 31, 2008
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    all i can say is interesting, and kind of sad too if you think about it, keep it flowing


  • DeSiBoO14
    October 30, 2008
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    Aw...DaTs SoO sAd!!BuT a GrEaT pOeM!!i LuVd It!!....ChEcK oUt My PoEmS 2!!