good girl
two shoes
whiskey
gin
scotch
rum
finds her courage
and freedom
distilled at happy hours
in the hallowed ivory towers
of a post secondary education
Author notes
Prompt: whiskey
A contest entry
- Contemporary Freeverse by kiwigirljacks.
700 points, ended November 5, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Ahh yes, I think many use this kind of dutch courage! Like the brevity of this write! Excellent.
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A lot said with a few well chosen words
So, it only took a near fatal poisoning by alcohol for you to find freedom and courage, huh? 
A wonderful write that "feels" honest and fresh... Excellent write!
Ken
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thank you dear
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Very creative write, enjoyable.
Vito
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