Baby I know you have work Saturday
I have listened to your excuses
I have let you get away freely every-time
For six weeks now I have kept on at work
I want Halloween night shift off
For dressing up
To go out as a couple and show we're still in love
For a friends birthday bash
As well as me being pagan; Samhain is my favourite day
You say; same people and the same sh*t
Why are you not bothered about our happiness
Do not judge; make the night your own
Letting people's actions ruin your evening
Makes you sound weak and patronising
I am hurt that you cannot see
How much this does mean to me
So long since we have had a good night out together
Feel I am going insane
We are soaring away from each other
The amount of times that I have made an effort for you in the past
From now on I will remember this and you shall starve
You say you are sick and tired of the crowds b*tching
They go to the same places, it is boring!
We know what to expect as it is always the same
I am sorry babe; but the night is what "we" make!
I am depressed and aching for fun
Nights in is now not enough
You do not have to drink like the others
They may not be dressed up in costumes
At least you would be fun and daring
Not a drag and monotonous!
You do what you like
Put the phone down on me
Make me cry
Tomorrow is Samhain; witches new year
To celebrate the dead that's gone
And rejoice the new life that's been given
I do not care what you do
But remember this
I will now know what to expect off you!!
Don't you ever disapprove of my Judgements
Author notes
just now had a disagreement and im left in tears :-(
In a list
A contest entry
- Fresh Emotion by Coffer.
800 points, ended November 3, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
um is this ok?
Comments
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This is so sad
Oh often they feel not the ache within our very soul .Uncareing but for their own needs is a true way to find yourself fixing your own meals cause its no longer your cup of tea . The turn around sometimes can be a ***** but its either me or you and I have done my share without your respect or appreciation . You taught me well just how you want life to be well lets see how long you like the turn around before you can see . You go girl and stand up and often when they are expected to do without they find its really not much fun
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Wow, this is great. Really uses powerful, real emotions from experience. Great work on your creative write. Good luck.
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I am sorry that your fighting and hope that thing work out in the long run... great expressive write... wish you well in the contest
Cheers
Jen
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What happened???
Loving
We know what to expect as it is always the same
I am sorry babe; but the night is what "we" make!
It's true... life is what you make it, so nights out must be too!! Should not worry constantly... make it good.
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