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do you ever...

do you ever think of me,
then sense a feeling of missing me some ?

do you ever run thoughts through your head
about what it would be like to have me in face view ?

do you ever yearn for a moment
when you can be with me ?

do you ever wonder if we are meant to be
or we are just two people in desperation to belong to someone?

do you ever admit to yourself of feeling emotional love 
that is new to you once again, because this is your second time around?

do you ever sense doubt and mistrust
your own judgement ?

do you ever believe your heart's conquests as being fair
and have faith in your minds decisions to be right ?

do you ever know love
without asking what "is love" ? 

do you ever ponder too long at the give way sign
even when the intersection is clear ?

do you ever call my name silently
hoping i would answer ?

do you ever cry inwardly
knowing you feel defeated and alone ?

do you ever thank God
that we did happened to cross each others paths ?

do you ever feel your heart beat quicker
when you see a note waiting for you from me ?

do you ever smile for no reason
knowing all is going to be OK ?

do you ever hold back
on what your heart most desires to say ?

do you ever think you would let go of my hand
once the lights come on at the end of the movie ?

do you ever need for the other to just say words
that fill your emptiness ?

do you ever just want one to understand you
yet knows silence is sometimes the best response ?

do you ever want to be kissed that badly
that you exercise and prepare your tongue for a wrestling match ?

do you ever want to ease the others pain
without intruding on their right of passage on that life lesson ?

do you ever just want to hear "i love you"
without asking if you are loved" ?

do you ever sit thinking you are alone
yet the mind is filled with thought of the other ?

do you ever regret what cannot be change
yet settle when you know it will repair itself in time ?

do you ever run your hand over your body
wondering if the other would like what you are feeling ?

do you ever say to them stay with me
through my worst and better times, accept this is me ?

do you ever just know that the love which you feel
is right and is without misinterpretations ?

do you know love ?
then again
do you know me ?
then again
do you know enough about love,
to love me unconditionaly ?
then again, if "Yes"
complete us
marry me

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  • The Gun Man
    October 30, 2008
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    One does not know love by default but simply feels it like spring to autum to the rose.


  • dustytiger
    October 30, 2008

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    this is beautiful, if someone wrote something like that for me i think my head would explode i'd be so happy, this is a great poem, i really liked the way you changed the feel of it at the end, great job, best of love in the contest

    • Seaquince
      October 30, 2008
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      thanks so much for the comment... and love back to you tooo..

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    October 30, 2008
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    Thank you for your beautifully expressed entry, Josie

    • Seaquince
      October 30, 2008
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      thanks for the comment... i am learning, when one is in that moment. better are the words told... no prizes for seconding ones first thoughts...

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