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The Grave Digger

Silhouetted by a full moon
he descends stone steps
and glides like a haunted shadow
among the buried carnage
He leaves footprints in the grassy dew
as a transparent fog
rises up
out of the quiet earth















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That is the picture I used by KILL89

A contest entry

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    November 12, 2008
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    Great imagery in this nice piece!! Thanks for entering my contest. I'm honored to have you share your work here. Good luck!


  • lianonsidhe silver member
    November 4, 2008
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    Oooh lovely and spooky!! Enjoyed this! Great.

  • cindyloo
    October 30, 2008

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    This is exceptional. It gives off such a dark and mysterious feeling. It is a perfect description of the photo. Good luck inthe contest.


  • dustytiger
    October 30, 2008

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    very nice, very dark and i actually feel like i'm watching the grave digger, great job best of luck in the conest


  • Rhythm Child
    October 30, 2008

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    i have read amazing poems today, this is one of the best by far, such originality and beautifully worded

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