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Second Chance

A fresh start to your life.
God gives you a second chance.
To be what he has called us
to do.

Dawn is the second chance
of joy, love, and peace.
Knowing that you are alive
to dream your dreams again.

Today is your second chance.
Dare not miss the beauty of
the day.  Immerse yourself
in the wondrous gifts God
has given us. He is the true
and ultimate artist.

A contest entry

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    This is a well written piece but well above the 30-40 words, but a great piece all the same. Best to you in the contest