people say we aren't suppose to be together
weather its because of our religion or our color
they say we aren't right for loving one another
for we cant possably feel that way for each other
i know i love u no matter what
i don't care what people say or that we got caught
i will carry your child with pride in my heart
knowing that our love will help us to never part
so forget what people think when they see us holding hands
forget them when they snicker at up while we are listening to a band
ignore the laughs when u give me a kiss
they are just jelious because they see what they miss
our children will grow up happy and loved
no matter what people think about our love
What did you think
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Oh my, I have been where you've been. I could've written something very similar. Nice job!
There are a few spelling erros "jelious" should be "jealous" and "weather" should be "whether". You do a nice job rhyming but "what" and "caught" isn't a true rhyme, kind of sticks out.
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