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Ready to Fight!

 

Warriors,

Braves,

Medicine Man,

dancing around fire.

 

 

Arrows, bow,

drum beaters.

Ready to fight!

 

 

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  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    November 22, 2008
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    Thank you for your entry

    umm, I can see the imagery in this one clearly. The heart of the warrior beats proudly and they will fight for what they believe in.

    The form was followed well. You kept to the word and line count. The imagery was very present as well.

    I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.

    God Bless
    Tammy

  • mz.butter
    November 5, 2008
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    good write.


  • The Angel in Black
    October 30, 2008

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    Simple, yet powerful. I myself am not Native but I do respect their culture deeply. I really liked this poem for the emotion behind it. Great job.

    • freespirit51
      October 30, 2008
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      The Angel in Black

      Thanks for the terrific and very kind comment. This is a very special subject close to my heart...Glad you enjoyed.

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