My story is too long to tell
I dwell from the lands of hell
Past love fuels my soul
Hatred keeps me in control
I dined with Satan,
My life, he claimed he would straighten
I wandered this earth looking for a mate
Now for true love, I must wait
No one warned me
They didn't know who I could be
I cry tears of sorrow
Dreaming about the lands of tomorrow
This spell the devil cast upon me
A beautiful dragon I shall be
I live only to experience life
But of course, every action comes with a price
Mighty and fearful I stand
Searching for my own land
This dragon thats transformed me
Let me live, let me free
Author notes
This was previously created for a group I was in 
A contest entry
- The Silver Sword of Truth- prewrites accepted....many images and quotes to select. by FlamesDragoness.
400 points, ended November 11, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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written with such power and strength....
the words breathed fire...and hell's demise....
sounds like a fierce red dragon is our midst...
reveling in the flames of fire!
well done...you commanded each line and verse!
flamesdragoness
fearless and bold write indeed!
may i remind you....
fire scorns and sheds fine layers...
revealing our hearts of stark humanity.
thankyou for your entry into this truth contest!
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I loved this poem!!!!!!!!! I feel like this every day of my life!!!!! It really hit home with me. This was v
ery good!!!! I really enjoyed reading this. Great detail!!!! -
Nicely written. It gives thought to me and many others. Don't deal with the devil unless you are willing to lose your soul. There is a great deal of truth in that.
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i really like the way you rhymed! the part about dining with satin was sooooo cool that was really well thought up. gosh super lyrics writer u could be!!!!
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WHAT A WONDERFUL WRITE!!!!!!
This is so lovely, filled with fantasy and also with emotion.
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Wow!!! This has such imaginary and was extremly dark! A great write, dear. It good a very good rythme and is not clitchy.
Thanks for sharing, sisy!
~Noor
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