He is amazing
and I love him so.
He also leads me
were I need to go.
He sticks up for me
provides us with food.
He dances wierd
and is always in a funny mood
He is a great prankster
he always makes me smile.
He trys to make me happy
even if he needs to run a mile.
there is only one
that I can look up to when i'm sad.
This person is number one
this peron is my dad!
Author notes
i made this for my dad because he is the greatest in the world and he would do anything for me.
A contest entry
- ~*~Love Without End~*~ by Trisha W.
700 points, ended November 3, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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wow...
sooo moving...especially for someone who never had a dad like that...it must be nice to be able to admire something like that and be able to share that with the world..thanks for sharing ur lovely write..good luck!!
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awwww
I love this.
It's so cute!
Well written.
Aren't fathers great?
Great Job!
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Adorable! Adorable that you have this great relationship with your dad, that he's such a jolly dad, and that you wrote this for him. I saw one type-o in line2 of stanza 4 where it says "i'm sad" - should be "I'm". Other than that it is lovely!
Great job! I loved it. -
This was sweet!I really liked this!It was cute a imaginative,and I'm sure your Dad would love it!!!
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