Fagin the artful dodger.
Will to gallows go?
Court decide?
Author notes
This poem entry is a quinzaine and is unrhymed verse of fifteen syllables, in a 7/5/3 format. The first line is a statement, the last two lines are questions. Have I followed all the rules?
I used five words from the word bank: Fagin, dodger, gallows, court, will.
A contest entry
- Poetic Form: Quinzaine - Prompt - Oliver Twist Word Bank by Little Eagle.
700 points, ended November 21, 2008, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Was Fagin really a bad guy?
Comments
-
Thank you for your entry
Well done with this. I am not familiar with the story of Oliver Twist to tell the truth lol. I have seen the movie, but it was some years ago.
You followed the form well. A total of 15 syllables and the statement, question, question format. The flow was good and it made sense.
I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.
God Bless
Tammy -
Interesting, no doubt. Well written.
Adding your comment:
