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Stars in her eyes!

There is a bright star
so butifull to see.
It makes me so happy
it also protects me.

It is so butifull
and really fun.
I can see it now
that magical star is my mum.

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  • Ana-Andrea
    October 31, 2008

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    Awww. So sweet!
    A couple of type-o's - lines 2 and 5. "Butifull" should be "beautiful".
    Nice little write about your special mom.