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Where? (thoughts, not a poem)







where?
where'd we go so wrong
Yes? ..anyone? ...tell me..


what lives are we?
feeding, "growing", indulging..
is this birth a waste?
bonded by fears; insecured
bound by fears; better complacent?

Didnt love.
Didn't receive.
Not without-
fear, conditions..
self-blinding  on purpose
the natural instinctive heart

with a human hand-
covering, "protecting"


to not hurt
..not love,
the lid shut tight
a caged protected elixir to life..

Where?...
When should we have stopped,
turned things around,
turned around?







Yes? :)

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  • wattle silver member
    November 3, 2008

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    Ms Me I think you have applied your particular talent and told me you are alive. --- You tell your story so well. I'm sure you're rapidly walking into contentment; it will knock you over when you least expect it. ---- I wonder what you will write about then?