On the furthest shore there lie leaves of gold,
marks in the sand, and memories old.
It's where we walked as you held my hand,
embraced and spoke, much like we planned.
I looked to your eyes, and found myself lost.
I'd live under those orbs at whatever the cost.
It was that very day that you earned my trust,
and proved that our love was much stronger than lust.
From that moment forth I knew in my mind,
the feeling we shared was one of a kind.
In all of my days I've never felt more,
than the one spent with you on that Florida shore.
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i agree with the others on this one. to write of a moment so great, beautiful write.
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So Beautiful
Hello, Your words are so lovely and tell of a sweet special moment you have never forgoten. Your amazing imagery brings the reader into your emotions and to the ocean shore. Excellent write. Terrific flow and rhyme.
Take care,
Bless You,
Sandy
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This is such a truthful honest and beautiful write! How lucky you are to be loved so truely! your poems just have a sparkle and magic that throws me and leaves me standing dumbfounded and enlightened
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