With you I can't be sad
'Cause when I am with you I am always glad
With some other girls I get nervous and I flee
With you I feel confident and filled with glee
With you I can't have one bad day
With you my worst day is it being okay
With you I feel really close
So close that I could help you boost
Boost your mood and make you smile
And when you smile it makes me smile
Smile like your baby ******
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another poem from one anonymous person to the other
Spelling is fixed by myself
names are cut out for the sake of those involved.
What Do You Think?
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Fix line 6
Nice short poem, and one I feel you could have done better. Line 6 feels not right, should be changed I feel, though can't offer you any ideas. The rest is good but kind of let down by line 6. "...is it being ok", almost sounds like you're asking a question, anyway it's still a good poem, just do something about line 6. -
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i didnt write this one.
one of my friends got it from her boyfriend. i just put it up.
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