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Self Told

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Everything
is so small;

compared to everything else I’m a mouse
in a cheese factory
full of cats;

yesterday would have found a way to become one;
blending in to savor my sated fill.

but today
claws impatiently
to know what’s outside the door;
beyond all these borders moving in on me;
masturbating fears,
suffocating dreams
until all I can do
is stop myself.

You said:
I love you carved upon trees and tables
in a town that misunderstood
a complete series of self-told lies;

I guess the cats got you …











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image prompt by Moriah Rullmoss

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  • MessedupMarionette
    November 13, 2008

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    First thing: I love the last line, especially how you end it "..." The punctuation brings the poem up to a different level. I really like this piece. It's very mysterious. Good job, and thanks for entering!