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Sagittarius

The bow in hand,
Fingers flittering fervently to fit the arrow in its hold
My vivacity clutched tightly inside the hull of my core.
I will not lose this battle, I will not let my desecration come to pass.
True, the forces of destiny greatly stake their fate in my enemy
But my resolve is strong. I am fierce.
I discern what I must do to save us, to extradite the forces of Anguish back to their abyss.
I must fight.
A fighter I am, and I fighter I shall forever remain.
The demon bodes its melancholy in my direction, yet I feel no deterrence. I cannot be swayed.
For my inner power outmatches any that pass my way.
Ethereal eyes of ghastly lurid proportions sizing me up and down,
The look of a predator upon its prey.
My arrow flies, and a livid claw thrusts its force upon me.
Together, we both fall, vivid crimson droplets staining the purity of the earth.
Divided by life, yet united through death.

Author notes

"I am universe, I am life "
poem by: Seclusion

Inspired by this:
http://lunebleu.deviantart.com/art/Sagittarius-67545594

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  • Re-invention silver member
    November 1, 2008

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    very well penned a lot of metaphors ere ,even thought I see you took the picture itself as the root of inspiration here, you managed to play it well... nicely done!