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A Long Way Up

Big city socialites
Barely there dresses.
Midnight chill kept off  their
shoulders by thick chinchilla fur.
Champagne filled bellies.
Strutting their stuff. A wiggle
in their midnight walk.
Frozen smile.
Eyes as dead as the animal
around their skinny necks.

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    Wow, harsh and down to earth, a wonderful take on this prompt with great visuals. Best to you in the contest