Big city socialites
Barely there dresses.
Midnight chill kept off their
shoulders by thick chinchilla fur.
Champagne filled bellies.
Strutting their stuff. A wiggle
in their midnight walk.
Frozen smile.
Eyes as dead as the animal
around their skinny necks.
A contest entry
- 30-40 words of Brilliance #22 by AutumnGypsy.
550 points, ended November 2, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow, harsh and down to earth, a wonderful take on this prompt with great visuals. Best to you in the contest

