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The Scuffed Soul of DRAGON

 

 

What bleeds within
the soul of man.
Invisible and unseen.

When fate does be….
A birthrite,
of merciless expectations
and im-prisoned deeds.

Flames in us a spark
un-emasculated
ripped and torn apart.

Embers ignite
releasing.....

Fire and Immortal
strength
into our weary hearts.


Raw instincts stoke
brillant flames

of beauty

un-willing to die
in heaps of ash.

Scars…our wings
of flight,
emerge without
apology or excuse.

Basking,
In… our… glorious
Strength and bold
lessons learnt.

We have
Stumped
The devil..
and lived
to claim

his tale.


I am White Dragon

FlamesDragoness,
My home is snow capped
Dome of Mt. Rainier.

If you have a frigid soul,
you will not survive my Lair.
Empty feats and devious warmth
does not impress nor melt
our glacier thrones of honor.

We serve a higher power.

Show unto me your spirit,
of Courage and Humility.
Speak wise and merciful,
bloody battles
you have feasted and survived.

Otherwise,
You will simply be…
Another mortal

of weathered ash
frozen in the gusts
of wind controlled
by all who test.

Flames the Fire
Of Dragon Lair,
Rise higher,
Uplift your wings
And be……
the power and breath
that embers in your soul.

The scuffed soul…

of Dragon burns

...without.....

apology or excuse.

 

It is I...who is

scenting 

and judging...you.

 

 

 Are you treasure...or simply...trinket.

 

 

Author notes

Contest prompt: I want to see your dragon soul.....I will judge your dragon soul and persona.

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Critiques welcome...i don't Bite down to the bone...just a nibbler..unless you are just plain rude!

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Comments


  • Dark Otter
    November 19, 2008
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    a dragon soul in breath

    does breathe essence of ancients that have lived and died in aeons past.


  • Draig aine gold member
    November 16, 2008
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    thumbs up

    lovely write my sister


  • nature mithya
    October 31, 2008

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    The first picture is so facinating that to go on lookin...

    ...would demolish any dragon.
    Lol
    Just joke.
    What a wonderful write in short lines ready to leap into your brains to call out come be a dragon if you have warmth and courage.
    At heart being a dragon is like living life fully.
    Congrats for the wonderful creation of this mystry into a virtual dream.


  • Wynd Arc
    October 31, 2008

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    Tis a peice that I could read over and over again...fine use of the Dragon nature and the descriptions are very well written...May you always stand proud...FlamesDragoness