Have you ever lived my life
or even seen me cry?
If you havent,
Then tell me why do you care as you do?
Have you ever loved someone so much,
That you never wanted to let them go?
Have you ever lost your best friend,
And told yourself that it just couldnt be so?
Have you ever cut yourself,
Just to see if you would bleed?
Have you ever felt such pain at night
That you cryed yourself to sleep?
Have you ever considered suicide
as the only way?
Have you ever told your best friend,
That you love him more than as a friend?
Have you ever fell to the floor,
And couldnt take kife anymore?
Hve you ever seen my tears,
Crash all around you?
Have you ever lived my life,
Or even seen me cry?
If not then tell me,
Why do you care as you do ?
A contest entry
- Your best freeverse. by jayyniecakes..
400 points, ended March 19, 63 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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raw emotion, raw talent, great poem
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thanks
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i said it the first time, I LOVE IT!!
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:)) now read the my life...unedited one!!
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i did!! LOL!
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was it good?
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heck, ya it was!! lol!
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y was it?
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it was amazing! i mean, you can really tell you poured all of your emotions into it! (it brought tears to my eyes)
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