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Thoughts are swirling in my brain
Half are bad
Half are good
To tell someone that I'm insane
I think I shouldn't
I think I should
I'm split in two and it's not right
I am there
I am here
Darkness swallows my shinning light
My future foggy
My future clear
The things I do are just an act
Soaked in beauty
Soaked in disgrace
My knife penetrates your unknowing back
The hidden killer
The two face

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  • Jessie L Oberlander
    December 21, 2008
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    Forgot to leave applause!


  • Jessie L Oberlander
    December 21, 2008
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    I REALLY like this poem, Kristy. I don't really like rhyme but this works very well.

    This part is my favorite:
    "Thoughts are swirling in my brain
    Half are bad
    Half are good
    To tell someone that I'm insane
    I think I shouldn't
    I think I should"

    Keep up the work!