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I'm Unbearable

I feel inhuman
Corrupted by life
My insides are bitter
I'm a dispirited shell
Nothing but fat and worms
Left severely unapproachable
My melancholic eyes see the unspeakable
I am your mirror
A damaged reflection
Cracks all through my shell
7 years bad luck
Fate is unmerciful to the repulsive

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  • Endlessperspectives
    February 14
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    I like it. It reveals the truth.


  • DemonicChanel420
    October 30, 2008

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    The words really cut like razors through the heart. It's just so raw and out-there, I could deffinately relate to this on many levels. I really love this poem, I hope that you start feeling better about yourself, you are a very talented writer.