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Eddy

Missing image

Ruby river,
steady stream.
Salty pain,
pushes through. 

I am sorry Eddy,
that your life was taken.
Warm asphalt river,
your body broken.

 

A speeding car,
no feeling within.
Leaving it's prey,
a trophy for all to see.

 

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  • Guerrero
    October 30, 2008

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    this has happened to me many times..and it never stops from hurting..especially if they meant something to you.. R.I.P


    • Rosemary Stroebel silver member
      October 31, 2008
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      Thank you

      I have lost a few pets in my time. It was just harder for me because I picked up his broken body moments after the car had hit him. He was still warm and I so badly wanted him to be ok.

      Thank you for your kind words. It is a solace in my moment of sadness in this sometimes very cruel world.