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Entwining Beauty

Every word speaks from the heart
  Now forever her soul does impart
Tears mixed with love embrace
Words that flow like heavens grace
Insights that find the soul
Never hurting is her only goad
In touch with her inner child
Never forgets that tender smile
Gold dripped words that rhyme

Behold the lady held in time
Each poem that she writes
Always shines with her light
Uses her pen like a magic wand
To always tell of her poetic charm
Yet forever Feather Snowfly remains

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  • Sandygram silver member
    October 31, 2008
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    So Lovely!!!!

    John, you show such caring to others on this site through your beautiful writing. This was amazing and I see she loved it. You are so thoughtful and such a blessing to me and others on her. Big hugs and smiles for you. This was such a delight to read. Blessings. Love, Sandy


  • Entwining Beauty
    October 30, 2008

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    Wonderfully touching poem, you wrote for me .
    Thank you so much I am deeply moved by you beautiful words you have said about me and my poetry, Like a beautiful song you have wrote thank you so much


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 30, 2008

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    Aww this is lovely! You always write with such a soft and beautiful touch, especially your dedications!