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The World in This Beyond - Sonnet XX

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 Whence now can we, to fathom some extent
enough from which an idol god bestows;
hath conquered human frailties, the descent,
helps faithless with some whispering I suppose,
suffice to say, to endless heavens vent

exceptions have extended life's compose.


The simplest version of the Lords surprise,
eavesdrops upon the world in this beyond
so we as verdant listeners advise,
our closest neighbours urging them, respond!
remember who shall yearn, delivers lies,

resurgance should adorn a magic wand.

 

Not taking it for granted, should one feel

to urge them man-man mountains, the ideal.

 

 

 

A Harrisham Sonnet

 

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  • Harrisham Minhas
    November 15, 2008
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    This is a beautifully-crafted poem, written in old-english style.
    This poem praises God and gives messages of goodness.
    Faith in God definitely gives strength.
    Well-written.

    Thanks for your entry.

    Harrisham Minhas


  • ronnica
    November 3, 2008

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    It seems I have found a new favourite, I really admire your command of the old language,
    and the sentiments expressed here.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    October 30, 2008
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    WOW!! WOW!!

    What an exceptional sonnet! I'm impressed already!
    This is an amazing piece of beauty.