you are the lyrics to my song

You bring the do-re-mi
to my sound of music.
All the pieces of my heart
sing in unison to love's sing-a-long.

Hey harmony,
give me something to remember.

You were the band,
I was the sweet, sweet serenade.
You are my Billboard Top 100 LP,
nothing could be greater.

Thank you baby doll
for playing your guitar
into the depths of my ear.

Our song will be loud enough
for the whole world to hear.

It's you and me baby,

hand in hand....

Author notes

5. and finally, give me young love. show me a soft summers night with two loving young people, show me the heartbreak of fall and the blooming of love again in the spring. show me what its like to be young and frivolous with your hearts simple desire. (please put OPT 5. in your authors notes)

A contest entry

Make me smile by XxForeverFaithfulxX. 1150 points, ended November 1, 2008, 9 entries
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♥give me love♥ options!♥ by Fallen-Phases. 450 points, ended December 15, 2008, 16 entries
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Fallen-Phases
December 12, 2008

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AWE
i loved this, i was never able to make metaphors and similies in my poems that well, but to me music and love are the very same, all credit due to this wonderful piece
movedon
November 2, 2008

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BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL!

love is good and bad (as i saw thats the list is in) and you have an awesome way with words..once again. i love it! Your words are like a soft song..just whispering love!!!!!

love,
mylee
XxForeverFaithfulxX
October 31, 2008

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aww
This was sweet, short but very sweet. I really liked this. Thanks for entering and good luck.

~Kayla