Who will be there
if I cry?
Who will cry
if I die?
Who will hold my hand
and tell me its allright?
I'm all alone.
Empty.
Cold as stone.
I've abandoned my tears.
Its been one cold hard year
Since you've been gone.
Its so hard to move on.
Sometimes i go to your resting place
And sit there apoun your grave.
I'll pour drinks for two
Spill a little out for you.
I always start to think about
What if it was me instead.
At least you would get to live out your life
and i would be the ones whose dead.
I would gladly take your place
if GOD would let me.
I would have no regrets.
What do you think?
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A little past halfway down, 'apoun' should probably be upon. And 'whose' should be 'who's', but other than that it's good. I don't know who this other person is, but I for one am glad you're here.
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AWE GEE!
thank you i appriciate it alot!
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